corey mcdermith

Thanks for the critiques guys. this was not really supposed to be anything. I was just bored and took this off the top of my head.

We are back once again to the place we have been ten thousand times before. Spinning around never touching the ground fighting and pushing for more. Fire inside flame burning ...

The emotion i felt when reading this story almost put me through the floor. wow. it was incredible. Keep up the awesome work and i hope to hear more from ...

in all reality i like my class zoology the best. all good fun.

If it was poetic then this would be good, it just lamenting prose that is unrefined being called a poem. This sounds almost disturbingly familiar to generic cries for help ...

i have to say i am a little confused about the whole thing. Is he a cat that turned into a chicken that thinks he's a human? If so, then ...

thanks to you all for reading my story. i will fix teh problems once i hve teh time.

hey! that was reallly good. i liked it and hope to see more of it in teh days to come. awsome and keep up the good work.

alright, here it goes. i think it was jsut right with its length and description of teh characters and all such rot. it had a few errors here adn there, ...

it was an all around good story. the only real problems were all of the "the's" but you fixed that, adn it does need to be spaced. try putting a ...

i still think it is an all around awsome story. good job adn keep writing.

hey! that was pretty dang good! i am only new to this place, but i read a lot and i know a good story when i see one. awesome job ...

im really gald you thought so, but no one else liked it and i thought it was really good. (sigh)

sorry tha my poem was not sataasfactory. i really am only a begginer at poetry.

alright. prior viewers might not have liked it, but i think it has good meaning to it. granted, it doesn't have the structure a poem needs, but who cares. i ...